Reviewer: insert56 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2018 6:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Wait I've read this one at least twice before today and never reviewed it? That makes no sense...

I LOOOOOOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH!

The guy being crazy and totally believing Shawn to be Lou no matter what Shawn said. And the cigarettes?! Agghhh.


“Huh.” He held the license up, looking from it to Shawn and back again. “Isn’t this your job, Lou? Starting people’s lives over from scratch? I wouldn’t be surprised if Shawn Spencer is either a really old geezer in a retirement home or dead.”


“I object to that.”


This is one of my favorite lines in all of fanfiction lol.

The whole fire scene was so imagery filled! I could feel Shawn's panic about being trapped in there and desperately trying to escape as his lungs filled with smoke and the chains warmed up. And just him spinning and spinning and turning and turning.

And then of course the little Lassie and Shawn scene at the end just pile on all that fluff XD

"I'm glad you didn't."

ASDFGHJKL;

Author's Response: EEEEEEEEEEE This review made my day. Seriously. I'm so glad you loved it so much. I remember I tried really hard and wanted to be creative, so I'm glad that came through!!

Reviewer: hypercell Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2010 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

very good! I really liked it.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Texasartchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2010 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww, that was a great one-shot.  Plenty of tension and suspense, nice that Shawn was being tortured and abuse because of a simple case of mistaken identity - sweet plot twist there - and burning cigarettes, too.  I think that is the first fic I've read where that's the means of whump!  KUDOS for originality!   And LASSIE to the rescue!  WOOOT!

 Thanks for writing this, it was a fun read.

 

Texasartchick



Author's Response:

Awesome!! I was aiming for something original there, but I wasn't sure since I hadn't read much outside of PF.

Thank you for the review; I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2010 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story!  Yeah for heroic Lassie!  But poor Shawn!!! I sure hope you write a sequel so Dennis can be brought to justice! It's just not right he got away after doing all that to Shawn.


Author's Response: You're right!! AHHHH I love it. *scribbles on idea pad frantically*



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