[Report This]Date: May 02, 2018 11:09 am Title: Hiding Space
WAIT A SECOND YOU SAID NO TRAUMATIC EXPERIENCES WHAT DO YOU CALL THESE EMOTIONS??
:P Kidding... kinda. lol
I really loved this. I wasn't sure exactly what was happening at first, but then it all just unfolds so smoothly and beautifully. And I love the fluffy family goodness you included. So sweet. Love daddy!Shawn. :)
Author's Response: See,"No TRAUMATIC experiences" was the key phrase. I didn't say anything about heart-melting ones! XD Seriously though, thank you sooo much for the lovely compliment! And by 'compliment' I mean your tears - just kidding! :P (But not - we writers tend to thrive on those XDD) *giant hug* ^^
Date: April 28, 2018 4:48 am Title: The Black and the Blue
Yang is so fantastically creepy. Just her saying "daddy" is so unsettling.
Don't take this the wrong way but I hope you don't ever make this into a full blown story, my heart couldn't take it. XD
Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, no offense taken, I don't think mine could take it either XD
Date: April 25, 2018 10:39 am Title: The Black and the Blue
This is revenge, isn't it? This is revenge for my story and WHYYYYY is someone dead at all?? *sobs*
You did nail the creepy factor of Yin and Yang spot on. I can't stand either of them, so kudos on translating that into your little fic!
Author's Response: *evil grin* Yes, this is revenge! X3 Lol, I struggled with how to end it and whether or not someone should be dead, but the short just didn't have the same ring to it without anyone getting hurt soooo . . . sorry Lassie XP
Thank you~! =D
Date: April 25, 2018 9:40 am Title: The Black and the Blue
I love you, Koohii. This is great! Yang was so creepy and her song was perfect for the atmosphere and the theme, of course. Such a creepy vibe permeated through the whole thing and Yang was spot-on. I like the way you explored what could've been for Yin and Yang. You're just awesome. :-)
Author's Response: Yaaaaaay!*hugs* Thank you soooo much! I'm glad you liked it! =D I think I actually creeped myself out while I was writing it. I still haven't totally shaken the feeling off yet XP
[Report This]Date: April 24, 2018 10:11 pm Title: The Black and the Blue
GIRRRRRRRLLLLL.
Man, everyone went pretty dark on this challenge XD
Also, YAS for Yin and Yang 'cause I feel like there's not enough fics with them.
Author's Response: The title was "The Black and the Blue"! I'm pretty sure the first thing everyone though of was a bruise and how they could whump someone with it XDD
Aww, thank you~! Yeah, I think they're a little underappreciated too, and when I first got the image of Yang singing that song I knew I HAD to write it for her XD Thanks so much for the review!
Date: July 16, 2017 5:57 pm Title: A Special Anniversary . . . Or Not
lol Poor Henry. Shawn would be the type to do that, wouldn't he? :P
Author's Response: Yeah, it seemed in character. XD Thank you for reviewing my little bout of nonsense~ :P
Date: July 14, 2017 11:36 pm Title: A Special Anniversary . . . Or Not
I think this is better than you think it is. The anniversary thing didn't seem awkward at all, and both Shawn and Henry were totally on-point! Nice job. Made me smile. :-D
Author's Response: Thanks~! ^^ I'm glad it made somebody happy!
I totally loved your entry for the challenge, by the way! You managed to get every single item in there! XD