Date: May 03, 2020 10:45 pm Title: Who Are You?
Oh this is such an interesting universe! I love the idea of Shawn being lost to his new form and doing his best to figure out who he is because of that. Also him racing with Juliet is such a fun concept! I loved the take on this prompt! Super creative!
Date: May 02, 2020 7:31 pm Title: The Sound of Silence
Wow! I love the suspense here! You seriously had me on the edge of my seat. I loved your mix of dialog and description, it really painted the scene well. Especially this line: The reaction was immediate, the movement fluid: a sidearm drawn. "Give me one good reason." It really captures the intensity of the revelation. Great job!
Date: April 13, 2020 10:56 am Title: Lockdown
I've never watched Transformers, but I still really enjoyed this. I was worried at first you were going to turn the Norton into a killer robot XD I liked that Shawn made sure to get protection for both Santa Barbara and San Francisco. :)
Date: April 13, 2020 4:03 am Title: Lockdown
omg okay that is not at ALL what I expected lol but I kinda love the idea lol. Also I totally forgot about those movies for a short while until now lol
Oh Shawnie Shawn boy... what did you do?? XD
Date: April 11, 2020 11:10 pm Title: Isolation
You were right, I didn't understand a word XDD But beautiful writing nonetheless! =3
Date: April 10, 2020 10:35 pm Title: Isolation
I'm going to be honest an say that I don't think I ever read that fic lol but I still like this a lot.
You could write mumbo jumbo and I'd still like it XD you're just a really great writer XD
I love fan fics of fan fics tho XD it's so meta.
Date: January 30, 2019 7:00 pm Title: Scripted
I really like the way you wrote this one! It feels almost like a quick montage of shots (kinda like Psych eps do with Shawn's observations) and adds this whole other dimension to the scene you're setting!!
Date: January 15, 2019 11:33 am Title: Surprised
OH. WOW. I love this. It's such a tiny snippet but yet it's perfect. I love how you conveyed all of the emotions in just a few words. And that end sentence!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Deej!
Date: January 11, 2019 3:35 pm Title: Surprised
THAT I'M NOT TELLING THE TRUTH
Author's Response: To quote Jack Dalton: "Exactly!" ;-)
Date: January 11, 2019 2:40 am Title: Surprised
*roars* RAAAAACH.
WHAT IS THIS.
THIS IS A MASTERPIECE OH MY GOSH.
I LOVE IT.
h0lY HeCkiEs
Author's Response: Thank you. *sweeping bow* Anything that elicits a roar makes me happy! :-D