Date: September 09, 2015 11:10 pm Title: Epilogue: Withdrawl
Argh! Post the sequel! I want to see how this plays out. And I'd love to see some Maddie entering the picture. People don't write about her enough!
Author's Response: She will come back in the second sequel because the first is all Olivia and I will soon!! I promise!!
Date: September 09, 2015 11:07 pm Title: I Swear To Tell The Truth, The Whole Truth, And Nothing But The Truth.
Lots of really good description in this chapter! For some reason, I just really love the image of Juliet spoon-feeding Shawn ice chips.
I HAVE BAD SHAWN FICS! ... Well, not me personally... So far, I've only done Bad Lassie. But I know where you can get your fix!
My personal favorite Bad Shawn story is here: http://www.psychfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=688
But there are more stories like this in the challenges section: http://www.psychfic.com/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=178
You can probably find more of them catalogued under different challenges, like the Dark Psych challenge. If you can't find them there, I'd recommend checking out the forums and requesting it over there! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!! And lol I needed that bit because it felt Shulesy to me... thank yu again!!!
Date: September 07, 2015 1:37 pm Title: Just Working....
Sequel? Yay! I can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm nowhere near done for it lol... there will be two. The first covers Olivia's side of things, the second you will learn what really happened to Shawn *devilish grin* but thanks :D
Date: September 01, 2015 11:09 am Title: Just Working....
Wait, Olivia's a psychopath?! Nooooo! (But good plot twist.)
Author's Response: Trolololololololol XD
Date: August 30, 2015 11:38 pm Title: Death Is Unavoidable, But It Doesn't Have To Be Now.
I really like the scene at the beginning of this chapter, where Gus ran in to find Shawn. You wrote that really well, and you had a good balance of description and action there. Favorite line of the entire story so far: "...trying to find the SBPD officers Gus called friends, and trying to find the friend Gus called family." Perfect, right there.
I forgot to mention earlier that even though I have no problems at all using HTML on my mobile device, I'm always way too lazy to use it, so I just take everything that should be in italics and put it in quotes instead. :-D I admire you for your tenacity in actually doing things the right way! :-D
Anyway, good story so far. It's getting interesting, and everybody loves some Shawn whump. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!! My 8th grade writing teacher last year was a huuuuuggge stickler about it but I guess it paid off...
Date: August 30, 2015 11:29 pm Title: Hips Don't Lie, But Lassie Does.
Can I just say that A. I love the chapter title on this one, and B. I love the David Tennant reference? :-D
Also, writing from your phone shouldn't make any difference. I write on my mobile device all the time, and the HTML still works for me. :-)
Author's Response: All of my friends thought this chapter title was stupid... I'll have to show this comment to them lol... also I kind of forgot about the David Tennant reference so when I read this I thought, "Am I such a fangirl that my subconscious wrote in a reference to DT that I didn't even notice??" And then I was like ooohhhhhhhh, thaaaaat one!! XD
Date: August 27, 2015 9:41 am Title: Just Working....
You should be able to bold and italicize things with HTML tags. To bold something, you'd put < b > Your Text Here. < / b > (Leave out the spaces.) To italicize, you'd do the same thing, but replace the B with an I. So you'd write < I > This will be italicized. < / I >
The first tag lets the computer know what you want to do with the stuff you're writing, and the end tag tells the computer that you want the bold font or italics to stop.
Hope this helps! If you're still confused, let me know and I'll send you some better directions. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks that helps a lot!!! I couldn't figure out what I was doing but that makes a lot of sense XD but I'm writing from my phone... would that make a difference?
Date: August 27, 2015 3:48 am Title: Death Is Unavoidable, But It Doesn't Have To Be Now.
I cannot believe the utter lack of reviews. One?! Seriously, there are a like 13 chapters, and that's all you get? People really need to get on it and start showing some appreciation.
Anyways, this is really good! I love the angst. And don't kill Shawn, he's too young to die!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) and don't worry... he'll stay alive. I don't have it in me to kill off one of my favorite characters.
Date: August 01, 2015 3:29 am Title: Hips Don't Lie, But Lassie Does.
I finally caught up on your story. Excellent suspense! I need an update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I really appreciate it! I will try to update as soon as I can but at the moment I don't have good Internet at the moment so my Wattpad is glitchy... I'm glad you enjoy it! :)