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Reviewer: Psych_Babe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2014 12:29 pm Title: Flashbacks....

Oooh interesting start! onto the next chapter!

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2014 2:03 am Title: Space, the final frontier....

You've heard about Pluto right? I'm sure you will agree then that scientists get stuff wrong too. :D

Everything creepy happening on State Street? You know that's right.

(Sorry, I'm super tired and for some reason started thinking like Gus.) 



Author's Response:

LOL!  No problem!  Glad you like it so far!

 

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2014 7:06 pm Title: One, two, three, FOUR ALIENS????

The elders took matters into their own hands. That doesn't bode well for Shawn, especially if the other aliens are coming clean and telling everyone else.

 My guess is Marlowe is an alien. Probably wrong but I feel like making an outlandish guess.

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2014 2:21 am Title: Wolves in Sheep's clothing

YOU @&@^%#&@&! That was so mean to leave it like that.

 Seriously though. Great cliffy. Too great. Well, now we know the aliens can body snatch, or appear as other people. Poor Shawn! 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, things *might* work out!  LOL!  Yeah, I can be mean sometimes with cliffies!

 

Reviewer: skylucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2014 7:47 pm Title: Nighttime antics

Thank you for updating--I love how both of them are worrying about Shawn and the very sweet Shules moment. Hopefully Lassie can save Shawn if they make a night raid to get him. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see.  Things aren't always what they seem....>:)

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2014 2:38 am Title: Nighttime antics

Dude! They are gonna kidnap him to space! *tries to block out all the "Are we there yet?" jokes running through her head.

Touching that Gus is so concerned about him and liked the cute scene of Juliet walking in on him sleeping. 

 

Thanks, now you have this running through my head - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVn1oQL9sWg 



Author's Response: LOL!  I started watching that and had to turn it off (I hate robots and robotic voices, especially at night)  You know, I may add some of that in....That would be so hilarious!

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2014 4:38 pm Title: What's a fake psychic to do?

You write Henry very well. I could totally see him having that conversation with Shawn. I am really wondering what the aliens are gonna do!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I try to get into the heads of the characters and write how I think they would behave.  You write Shawn exceptionally well.  I try, but that head of his is so jam-packed, I can barely move!  LOL!

Reviewer: skylucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2014 11:35 am Title: What's a fake psychic to do?

I'm not a huge SCIFY fan but I do like it enough to try it--and I'm really liking this one ;^) Looking forward to reading the next chapter and see what is in store for Shawn. I esp. love the way you are writing the characters interactions--and loved the whole men-in-black vibe with the FBI and Shawn picking up on the fake badges (which had that perfect line from Jules :^)

Reviewer: marniewings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2014 10:59 am Title: What's a fake psychic to do?

Another awesome chapter. Update soon!

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Date: January 07, 2014 10:58 am Title: Falsety, Fakery? I've Heard It Both Ways

lol Shawn's potato, tomato haha.

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