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Date: August 15, 2013 6:14 pm Title: Grave Robbers?

Another chapter. Now. Please, please, please!!! Must read more!!!!

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Date: August 15, 2013 5:06 pm Title: A night at the movies!

I just started reading this and I absolutely loved this first chapter!!! I'm going to read the rest right now!

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2013 7:56 am Title: Grave Robbers?

Love the fact that Shawn had a green coffin. Not sure if you mentioned that before and I missed it but it is so him.

:( sad that he had to kill someone.

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Date: August 14, 2013 6:10 am Title: Vampiristic Intentions

I really hate her. SO Shawn killed someone!? Wow.

 

Melinda really needs to do a bit more research on her turns if she thinks Shawn is going to just give in.



Author's Response: We don't know what happened all those years ago. Did Shawn kill someone?  Was it an accident?  It's going to play into this story, too...

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2013 6:09 am Title: Halloween night when the witches run....and vampires?

:) cool that you went with a more traditional vampire. Gives it a more supernatural touch.

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Date: August 13, 2013 12:16 am Title: Sadness and Anger

Does laughing through this chapter make me evil?

It was very touching but just knowing what is going to happen made me laugh.

Don't ever worry about chapters being long. I have long since realized that you need to make chapters as long as they need to be.



Author's Response: Ooookayyyyy....LOL!  No, I'm sure it doesn't make you evil.  I mean, everyone interprets in their own way!  Yes, knowing what's going to happen does help....wait until the funeral.....it's going to be a *hair-raising* experience!

Reviewer: marniewings Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2013 5:27 pm Title: A night at the movies!

Brilliant! Loved it. Loved the hissing!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I knew I had to put something in between the two friends. 

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2013 4:58 am Title: A night at the movies!

Yea for Vampire hissing contests! I'm glad I could corrupt someone else.... that sounded better in my head. Anywho, great start and perfect cliffy.

 



Author's Response: Thank you!  Now, I just have to figure out what to do!!  LOL!  I will, though.  Thanks for planting the idea in my head; or corrupt as you put it!

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