[Report This]Date: September 12, 2013 8:11 am Title: Endings are sometimes bittersweet....
Shawn has to come up with a different name! I don't think he'd give up on the super hero thing especially if Gus isn't. :)
I loved the references to Shawn's crane style and the fact that Gus is kicking butt.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, he might just do that. We shall see what Gus does.
Date: September 11, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Into the Nest....
Is it wrong I started humming the Mortal Kombat theme at the end? Hehe. Can't wait to see the fight
Author's Response: LOL! No! In fact, that helps me decide how to write it! Music with a beat!
Date: September 10, 2013 8:28 pm Title: The Gray Spirit is......missing?
OH no! Gus! I wonder if Shawn and Juliet will realize who Gus is now.
Author's Response: You know it! Now, for some more fun!!!!
Date: July 31, 2013 12:46 pm Title: A Moment in Time
Thanks so much for taking my advice and making it shules-y. Your stories are amazing
Date: July 30, 2013 7:50 am Title: A plan is formed
You've got to put more shules. At least one chapter should be mostly shules. Like them talking about the case at home or something
Author's Response: It's not going to be easy to add more Shules. The spotlight is on Gus, but I'll try.
[Report This]Date: July 30, 2013 12:18 am Title: The Deal
Lassie and Gus... working together. That is all kinds of wrong. Lol. At least he now knows what Gus can bring to the table.
Author's Response: Yep! It may seem wrong, but it's great for this!
Date: July 29, 2013 11:02 pm Title: The Bust...ed head
Good job! Just put more shules. A lot more shules. People like that especially since we have none as of right now
Author's Response:
There's more in later chapters, plus I'm writing another chapter now. There will be, trust me! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 29, 2013 12:37 am Title: Wait for iiiiiiittt....
Oh man. Woody is going to crack like an egg. Sing like a canary! ;) I love how Lassie knows Gus is the Spirit, but doesn't believe it.
Author's Response: You never know what Woody will say....:)
[Report This]Date: July 29, 2013 12:31 am Title: Identity revealed?
That was a great turn around! I am laughing so hard right now. Thanks for such an awesome chapter... er three chapters! Gotta read the rest.
[Report This]Date: July 28, 2013 2:14 am Title: The Bust...ed head
*Gasp* Oh no! I was wondering when Gus was going to get in over his head! Great cliffy
Author's Response: Yes, I am the queen of cliffys. Especially this one. Thanks!