Reviews For 12:04 Wake Up Call
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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2019 1:00 pm Title: Freshie Perspective

As soon as i finished reading this chapter i realized that i was really hungry, like starving hungry, and my first thought was, 'oh shoot, im a vampire.'

Author's Response: HA HA! I do talk about them having the vampire munchies a lot in this one...

Reviewer: moondragon23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2013 3:31 am Title: Family Matters

Really loved this story. I have to stop reading your stuff in the middle of the night. Now I have to go on to the sequel yet again.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I had a ton of people ask for the training that I ghosted over between the other two stories and I relented and wrote it. I am happy I gave in because it does show a lot more of Shawn's internal struggles.

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Date: July 26, 2013 3:22 am Title: I Spy

Absolutely loved the spy fight.


Author's Response: Chuck and Morgan are so much like Shawn and Gus. They've known each other forever.

Reviewer: moondragon23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2013 3:14 am Title: Freshie Perspective

Really good chapter. Good thing Shawn has self control. 'freshies' and new vampires do not mix well.


Author's Response: No, they really don't. Shawn's self control came at a huge price though. Lots of PTSD there. Lol.

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Date: July 26, 2013 3:06 am Title: Blood Brothers

I really need to watch Chuck now. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Chuck is AWESOME. It is actually what got me into Psych. I read a crossover fiction and I was like... Psych...hmmm. I may have to check it out. 9 months later, I am still writing fiction. Lol

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Date: July 26, 2013 2:55 am Title: The First Day of the Rest of Your Eternity

I loved Shawn goading Lassiter into attacking. So perfect. But Shawn seems to have some things he needs to work through.

Author's Response: Yep, they are each realizing just how volatile they are emotionally.

Reviewer: Dragonflm61 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2013 1:07 pm Title: Family Matters

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters! I've been out of town with limited internet access. Consider this a big review for the last three chapters!

I loved the ending and I loved the training. The Chuck parts made literally laugh out loud. Love that show, too! I can't wait for the final installment. This was a great little story and I loved it :).

Author's Response: *Squee* Glad you liked it. It is only going to get darker from here for poor vampy Shawn though :D

Reviewer: marniewings Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2013 1:24 pm Title: Family Matters

awesome!! loved it :) great chapter update soon

Author's Response: I'll try to get the other story out soon but this one is done. :)

Reviewer: back2black Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 2:47 am Title: I Spy

Shawn musing that if he kicked Lassiter's butt he would be kicking his own butt cracked me up. I laughed for a good while over that. Very cute.

I LOVE that Jules came to see Lassie! And that Shawn could feel that Lassie was no longer upset but almost...happy and content!!!

Poor Shawn seems to have a lot of worries these days. He may bruise his friends, can't let Lassie know he sired him, can't show up Lassie, feels everything Lassie feels.

This is a GREAT chapter and I enjoyed the fight scene! Sad the story is coming to a close. But looking forward to the next story!!



Author's Response: Thanks for liking it. This one has been harder to write for me because I can't put a whole bunch of stuff in that I want to because I didn't have them knowing it in the second story. Bleh

Reviewer: back2black Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 9:29 pm Title: Freshie Perspective

I enjoyed this chapter, poor Lassiter! Always shown up by his nemisis Shawn Spencer!

And also I am sad for Lassie because he doesn't have anyone to visit him! Awww. How about Henry? He can come visit Lassie! LOL Of course Henry would just use that as a way to watch Shawn like a hawk and give Mick "pointers" and ideas to push him!

I feel bad for Shawn too, to feel responsible for someone you neither like nor dislike and that someone mostly disliking you, is stressful! Shawn is just catching it from all angles and trying to keep the other two away from the hot blood donors....POOR SHAWN!!!

Great job!



Author's Response: :) I may be nicer to Lassie in the next chapter. You are going to like how.

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