Reviewer: GmasAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2021 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute!

Reviewer: Pineapples_and_Psychos Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2012 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this!

Reviewer: ilovemyboys Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2010 2:11 am Title: Chapter 1

I love it!! Thanks for posting!! I see you're great with Shawn/Lassie and if you take requests, I would loveee to see this in fanfiction: Lassiter finds Shawn somewhere and drags him out. Shawn is goofy and slaphappy in a drunken type of state but got hit with something. He is also limping. Lassiter drags/carries him to his car and checks Shawn's vitals, including using a thermometer, to which Shawn tries to spit out, but with one look of Lassiter's glare, does what he says. Then Shawn sings songs (still in same state) in the front seat as they head somewhere.

Author's Response: All excellent ideas -but with the rate I update, it would probably work better to post it as a challenge :).  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: silverluna Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2009 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable story, with some whump for Shawn, Buzz's goofy but semi-heroic acts, Juliet and Lassiter's anger and even Lassiter sort of admitting that Shawn was part of the team, Team Psych! lol. Poor Buzz having to "babysit" and then try to prop the tranqued Shawn up like a "Ken doll" (great line!) as Shawn slurred his words and tried to insist he was just about nearly fine. It was so funny when tranqued Shawn was trying to get Gus off the phone by trying to make Gus believe the line was crackling but it wasn't sounding convincing and Shawn was just spitting on the phone, lol. I also enjoyed Buzz telling Gus that he was right and Shawn was wrong. :p

I just loved these paragraphs:

Shawn could see Lassiter and Juliet peering at him, worried expressions on both their faces, but they were distorted and odd looking. Lassiter was talking, his mouth moving, but no sound seemed to be coming out of it. A second later a slow, deep voice broke through, but it was too hard to understand, and even harder to care. He saw Lassiter look up at someone behind him and say something, but he didn’t catch any of it.

A second later the world was pitching past his slowly tracking eyes, trees blurring into the sky. An arm was sliding around his back, and suddenly his legs were swinging up and into someone’s strong grip. It was dizzying, but hardly worth the protest. He realized he was staring up at Buzz’s curious face and towards the blue of the sky. He gazed, eyes glassy, past both.

after Shawn ends up punctured with the third one and Buzz sweeps him up into his arms, "bridal style" as Shawn's vision and perception fades. Lots of great imagery! OMG, and the dispatcher: "That sounds like something Shawn Spencer would do!" LOL. :D It so does!  Just awesome. :) Shawn's nickname for Buzz was so cute. :) That's a nifty idea too, having poor Shawn open the door all rigged up with darts. :) Loved Juliet & Lassiter's reactions to the criminals setting it up to kill Shawn, they were mad! It was great. :) Awesome story, it was a fun read! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You leave such great reviews - I can't tell you what it means to have you quote back lines to me.  It's extremely gratifying and stokes my somewhat unhealthily large ego.

Imagery is so important to a story - I like to be able to see everything that's going on in my head, and the great thing about writing is that you can make people feel and/or see what the character is feeling and/or seeing.  Augh, I'm starting to repeat myself - I blame the lack of sleep.

 Thank you again!  Can't say it enough :).

Reviewer: hondagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2009 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw...so cute. I loved the ending.

 

-honda