[Report This]Date: November 18, 2014 1:03 am Title: Identity - I am Shawn Spencer
I just realized that I'm a big, big fan of your entire series yet I failed to mention it in the Response section... *hits head against desk* I love this series soooo much that I was inspired to write my own (unfinished) heroes/psych crossover. I just love this so much and btw, this is my favorite chapter: ““You chased a shapeshifter.“ he stated matter of factly and then, as if that was common sense: “You donīt chase a shapeshifter.“” *duh*
Date: December 26, 2013 4:44 pm Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
*big sigh* :D I’m finally done reading this after so long of putting it off. Overall it was an interesting read, but there were some parts that were confusing my sense of direction with characters, especially around the desert events. Were they on the mountain? Off the mountain? How far away were they from the mountain in different scenes? But that could be my mind not taking in everything… as usual. Also I’ve noticed that you used ‘save’ a lot of times in place of ‘safe.’
One question really bugged the heck out of me throughout this: how did the cars not get totaled? I mean with the way you described it, their cars were tossed in the storm, thrown into large rocks by the wind, they even played chicken (in which I do know one car did get totaled from that, I think). There was so much that was done that could’ve left all the cars there inoperable.
Greg reminds me so much of the Governor from the Walking Dead with his selfish, one—track revenge and with the way Greg commands Rickie to do things. But the Governor is way more brutal and crazed. I really wished Greg was punished for causing all the mess he had done.
I don’t really know what to say about this story. It was lacking in some aspects, mainly descriptive, and wasn’t one of your best. Now I’m not saying give a full fledge, make-you-feel-the-environment description. But I think you know what I mean. Anyway, Angel’s Demon seems very interesting on the contrary and I’m hoping that the break you took between writing this and writing the next one had returned you to full writing form.
My sincerest, honest (very short summarized) opinion,
Signed: Luna :D
I felt like signing it. Different, no? XD By the way, that was written before I read your author notes. Now I’m on my way to reading the next one.
Date: November 13, 2013 7:07 pm Title: Angelīs Demon
I still need to catch up with this but felt horrible that after 11 chapters such awesome series had only one review. Keep writing ;)
Author's Response: That´s really nice of you. But I hope you will get around to actually read it too. (Don´t worry. I´ll keep writing disregarding the lack of reviews. The story demands it. Even though I am missing to hear how people react and respond)
[Report This]Date: August 10, 2013 9:32 pm Title: Angelīs Demon
Ooh interesting! can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Don´t worry, you will. Glad you still like.
Date: May 15, 2013 5:32 pm Title: Identity - I am Shawn Spencer
SO AMAZING OMG
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2013 9:49 pm Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
Hey Nur! I know you want to strangle me. I want to strangle myself for "putting off" reading this. I blame the ton of things my attention has been jumping to and fro from. I'm so guilty of shutting down to focus on one thing, and *whispers* I got my PS3 back *end of whispers* So you understand. I hope you understand.
So I've started reading today. (Don't spoil me.) I see you've finished this already. O_O I feel like I've missed the train and I'm left to stare at the tracks and the ball of dust in the distance... But I'll be okay.
So far it's good, though there are some mix ups with present and past tense in the dialogue, especially where do or doesn't is supposed to be did and didn't. But anyway I'll continue reading the next chapters between my study breaks, so I can catch up.
Author's Response: Hi, there. Nice to have you back. And no, I don´t wanna strangle you. *thinks this over* Okay, maybe a little. But I know how it is to be busy and delaying and delaying, so I can´t really blame you. It´s good to know you didn´t forget it for good. So I dare to keep believing this story is worth to be continued after all. I plan to take a break for a while before posting the next story though, so you´ll have some time to catch up. Let me know how it was. *waves* See ya around.
[Report This]Date: April 21, 2013 6:38 pm Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
SOOO exciting! Of course Shawn refuses to listen to anyone who tells him to stay behind, that is why he always gets in crazy situations. I hope everyone survives these storms because it doesn't seem like Alice plans on stopping any time soon!
I can't wait till the next chapter:)
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. So here´s the end of the story. Seems you were right, huh? :)
[Report This]Date: April 19, 2013 7:22 pm Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
Wow!!! some crazy desert adventure!! Alice is definitely not too happy with them on her terf. Can't wai to see what happens next!!
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2013 2:47 am Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
These kids are crazy!!!! Poor Sylar, Mohinder is being brutal. I really enjoyed the way you told everyone's stories:)
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happened to everyone and when will Alice turn up.
Author's Response: Yes, these kids are crazy. And Mohinder isn´t brutal. At least not more than usual. He simply doesn´t know how to deal with all the memories. And the way I told all their stories was a reference to a very great animated movie. Shawn named it already. Maybe you can guess it :) Update´s on the way.
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2013 2:24 am Title: Redemption - Desert Storm
Save Sylar save the world, of course Shawn knows what to say to Hiro. I like that there'a abit more Shawn, at least so far in this story. Poor Gus, he had no idea what he was walking into!!
Author's Response: Well, I figured it was a funny line for Hiro to say. It fit´s for him. And he confused the heck out of Shawn and Mohinder. :))