Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2018 8:37 pm Title: For redwolffclaw

I wish they had done this on the show. The closest they got was when Declan analyzed him. That was good. This was better. Really great story.

Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2018 9:02 am Title: For Spencer05

OMG!!!! This is soooooo good!!! Please expand on it!!! Give the details of what happened to him in the cabin and what everyone went through while searching for him. More details of his recovery too!!! This is a great story, so I need more of it, pretty please! Lololol! Thank you for this!

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2018 1:24 am Title: For PineappleHead

Perfect ending!

Reviewer: Koohii Kappu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 6:41 pm Title: For insert56

*goes to see what my buddy is screaming about, spends an hour+ reading it, promptly bursts into tears*

There's too many emotions in this ;~; I don't really have words because this sort of emotionally drained me just by READING it - God, you're so good at writing! Especially similes, oh my gosh, you can just hand those out a mile a minute and they're *ALWAYS* perfect ;~;

This here, too:

"The world is really just a bunch of dots, love: you just have to connect them. And you’ll be better at it than anyone else."

In the beginning you had Shawn describing his parents as dots of color OMG YOU ARE BRILLIANT.

*continues to cry*

Reviewer: Coffeesugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 3:58 pm Title: For Koohii Kappu

This was so sweet and so well-developed! Jules's voice feels real and raw, and absolutely believable. She sounds just like the mature, well-put-together, sweet person we love, more interested in being heard and understood than being a perfect golden-haired doll. Loved it!

Reviewer: Coffeesugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26, 2018 2:51 pm Title: For PineappleHead

Well, are you happy??? Are you satisfied you're making me, a grown ass woman in the middle of her post-Christmas activities, whimper with actual pain? Seriously, my confusing sense of humor aside, this story KILLED me - in all the best ways. The setting, the heartwrenching truth of Lassie's increasingly muddled thoughts (remembering how he's always wanted to be a chief of police AND a father - oh, my secretly family-man Carlton) the suspence in the last sentences - because, will he pull through? Will Jules save him? Will he have the chance to wake up and realize he's not nearly as alone as he thought he was? *is emotional* *hums to a frequency unknown to human beings* ANYWAY, THIS IS FINE. VERY FINE.
Special highlights: "Carlton was sad and afraid." Okay, I feel personally murdered by this sentence - my boy Lassie, alone, sad, and so afraid to actually admit it, even if just in his head? I'm so not ready for this, and so here for this at the same time.
And Jules being both his last thought and his savior? Freaking perfection. I'm screaming, not gonna lie.
To get to the real questions - you have any idea what it means hanging here, not knowing what's gonna happen to our head detective? And most importantly, can I bribe you into writing a little sequel? What's your beef, dear Insert? Jewels? Pineapples? Gus's infamous credit cards?

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2018 5:09 pm Title: For redwolffclaw

Thank you soooooo much Spencer05!!! I knew enough about CSIto get the crossover right away.

I loved the psychoanalysis of Shawn and the description of the whole group of them giving him a once over like Henry.

This was a perfect gem and I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: dragonnan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2018 2:33 pm Title: For Dragonnan

Thank you, PineappleHead!!! You are freaking epic!!!!!

Reviewer: Coffeesugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2018 9:13 am Title: For Coffeesugar

Awwww - thank you, thank you, thank you! This was extra sweet and absolutely adorable. I loved Lassie reacting to emergency like the well-trained individual he is - and loved how his friends immediately rushed to his side without a single momento of hesitation, like the good makeshift family they are. And Carlton confessing his true feelings because he thinks himself on the verge of death - there, that was absolutely on-spot and weirdly in character: as serious a person as Carlton Lassiter wouldn't want to pass away without making things clear and leaving his business in order. And it's so typical of him, not letting Jules the time to explain and then practically cursing himself for being still alive and forced to live with the consequences of his confession... which turn out not to be as dire as he thought, but still.
The ending was so very cute and fuzzy-feels-inducing, too. Gus and Shawn not rubbing it in, because deep down they care, and Carlton realizing maybe he can survive having his feelings out in the open now and then.
By the way, I'm terribly sorry I didn't answer your inquiry about Marlowe right away, author! For future ref, I'm down with a dash of romance if well-done ;D
Thank you so, so much for taking the time to write this and gift me with a perfect, Lassie-whumpy holiday story. It's much appreciated, and a real little jewel of Psychness. And I feel like I'm going to read this again - and again and again...

Reviewer: Coffeesugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2018 8:39 am Title: For me_

How dare you. How dare you hit me with such perfect awesomeness first thing in the morning - because so much in this story ticks all my favorite boxes. The family feels, the sibling-like banter between our two favorite Psych dummies, Juliet's warm strength, Carlton being an adoring dad - in no universe Carlton Lassiter wouldn't be absolutely in love with the concept of being a dad and with the actual experience - and the badass, strangely heartfelt, adorably disfunctional dynamic between Henry and his brilliant headache of a son. I loved the call so much - Shawn's revelation and Shawn's tears, and the way they can get each other in surprisingly accurate ways, and the fact Iwas literally hanging on the edge of the seat because I honestly didn't know if by the end of this I would be crying my eyes out or grinning like a fool (I'm grinning and squealing, by the way). What a wonderful, festive, very Psych story. Thank you so so much for brightening my day :D
PS: Shawn half-forcing Lassie in a comforting hug - that was so, nice. So, so nice - the hate-love saga we deserve XD



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