Date: February 16, 2009 10:34 pm Title: #39- Dreams
This was great sas! I really like how you described Juliet's feelings, and her reaction to that little bit of information that Shawn let slip. I also love how you mentioned this is the first bit of information Jules has really gotten from him, and I think it's very like Shawn not to reveal his emotions too much, or to have an excuse to stay in one place, that excuse being Jules if he got too close to her. I really really love you last lines, and I feel like even Shawn doen't know the answer to her question, even if she doesn't understand.
Anyway, short story long, I really liked this chapter. Great job sas!
Author's Response:
awwwwwwwwwww *smished pat* I wubbles and lurvles and hearts you to the max
you is indeed weisome, thanks chica ;) <3
Date: January 14, 2009 1:01 am Title: #39- Dreams
I think I'm glad your updating again, and I'm ready for your next :)
But this was a good chapter too!
Author's Response: that's always good to know..thanks :)
Date: November 05, 2008 10:18 am Title: #15-Silence
what happend!? WHAT HAPPENED!!!???? UPDATE PLEASE!!
Author's Response: i have no idea actually XDDDDDD..he got shot..but why? i do not know...i might be updating soon..i don't know..kinda in this funk but thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: August 15, 2008 1:30 am Title: #15-Silence
I really liked the flashback snipits throughout the chapter! Great job sas, as always! Update soon.
Author's Response: aaaww rhanks :)
[Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 6:01 pm Title: #15-Silence
You made it so freaking strong! That piece of writing just hits ya like a ton of rocks. I think that the best aspect was how you put those quotes in and tied them into what happened. Just mind blowing.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, you're freaking brilliant when it comes to writing Juliet.
Author's Response:
OMG OMG OMG THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: August 13, 2008 10:42 pm Title: #15-Silence
I'm glad you pointed me to your story - it's a very interesting idea, and you've come up with some great scenes! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: yaaaay..THANKS!
[Report This]Date: July 20, 2008 12:21 am Title: #87 - Food
"Upon opening her eyes, she was met with a pair of green eyes looking at her, so intensely, that if she were standing she was pretty sure she’d lose her footing." *squee* I just loved that little bit. It really conveys the impact of a single look, and Juliet's reaction. That one part says so much.
As always your characterization was awesome, but I would never expect anything less of you. ;)
You better update some more!
Author's Response:
XDD
I'll try to update some more..thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 8:01 pm Title: #87 - Food
Loved it! It might be short, but it's pure awesomeness! It is really cute, the whole layout of the chapter and everything was great! Great job.
Author's Response: *grins* you think it's AWESOME! dude that is sooo AWESOME! lol thanks for reviewing :)
Date: July 17, 2008 12:45 pm Title: #87 - Food
sorry doesn't compensate for the shotness...hmf..joke....as usual berry good
Author's Response: aaaw tenkie nika :)
Date: July 17, 2008 1:49 am Title: #87 - Food
You so did not disappoint!! I loved it! This was close talking with an even better last line!! Great job! Which line ws it that you had trouble with?
Author's Response:
Ome of the last lines...not a part of the dialogue, glad you liked it thanks :)