Date: September 17, 2007 12:31 am Title: Trap
;_; This stuff is so awesome, but it makes my gut clench anyway.
Kladinski's little Radio Shack gadget had blocked Juliet's phone's signal; it took some fiddling and finally smashing the box with the butt of her pistol to properly call for back-up and an ambulance.
That made me LOL out loud. XDDDDD
Nice work. :)
Date: September 16, 2007 6:42 pm Title: Trap
I TOTALLY MISSED THIS ONE! GAH!
*iz teh stupid*
Anyway, LOVED THIS!
And yeah, this was who I was expecting.
Love the scene with Lassie there at the end. Awesome.
Yeah, this story pretty much rocks.
The ficcer in me that hates char-death would argue that it could have been done without that part, but the other, more intelligent, non-fangirl side of me thinks it probably couldn't have been. So I like it. I do.
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW YOU WRAP THIS ALL UP! :D:D:D:D:D
Thank you~!! The scene with Lassie was one of my own favorites, I spent the whole story waiting for it, so...
And yeah...I don't think this story could've been done without the char death, as it's the whole point, what would happen to Shawn After...but I feel a bit guilty actually writing it. I owe everyone something lighter! (Gus is saying it's time to torture Shawn, while *he* gets to point and laugh. Or more likely worry his little head off, but...)
Date: September 16, 2007 5:25 pm Title: Trap
I love this story! Great job! I can't wait for the conclusion! (And I know what you mean about withdrawal...my internet on campus is awful and it'll go down for days at a time)
Author's Response: Thank you - posting the epilogue now! (and all my sympathy on the 'net - days? ack! end of the world!)
Date: September 16, 2007 3:37 pm Title: Trap
Hm...Lassiter knowing was a bit of a nice touch. What'll they do about the La Feds wanting to know who the Whisper is? :D
Please keep up the great work and update ASAP!
Thank you! Glad it wasn't totally obvious Lassiter knew, I was trying to play with that...
Off to post the epilogue now, hope you enjoy it!
Date: September 16, 2007 8:24 am Title: Trap
This is a very cool fic. It's interesting to see Shawn without his "safety net" - it reminds me of Future!Hiro on Heroes. Juliet's and Lassiter's reactions are also interesting to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm fond of future-fic stories, how people could be changed... And hee, thanks for the comparison - future!Hiro's story was much entertaining (if tragic!)
Date: September 16, 2007 6:22 am Title: Trap
Oh my gosh. Wow, just great. I really loved this. Please please please tell me Shawn is going to stick around Santa Barabra a little longer.
It didn't occure to me that Shawn actually cracked the case of who set the bomb, but it makes so much sense. And is really....sad. Great work.
Thank you, so glad you're still enjoying it! And I'm glad that Shawn informing Lassiter wasn't totally obvious...I don't think Shawn would've left with those killers getting away, but he'd trust Lassie and Jules enough to take care of it.
Will be posting the epilogue now, love to know what you think!